Talk:Nali

Add sections/headers
Obviously a great amount of time and effort went into this article (most of it by Sijik if I'm correct), and I of course applaud that. It seems a lot of thought has gone into why things on Na Pali are as they are... I'm sorry; you're right, there's a "but" coming. :)

But, I still think the article could be improved by adding sections/headers, and moving some parts of the text around. I imagine a part "Religion", a part "Architecture", a part "Skaarj influence", something like that. For instance at the moment the Skaarj aren't really introduced in the article, but suddenly mentioned as "their Skaarj oppressors". A section devoted to them would be more suitable to introduce readers who never played Unreal and don't know about the subject to the Skaarj. Parts about religion and architecture are obviously intertwined, but at the moment the article is moving from A to B to A to B. Sections would make it easier to read, and easier to filter out specific information.

As always, that is my opinion. :)